Brief Explanation of my life/Half Fiction
Going to Disney world with family
the experiences going on all the rides
waiting in the long line
living in a cool Hotel
spending time with family
Adventures after school
Run around
Find bugs
Race play tag
Move out of old house
Move in to my new house
Going into high school Freshman
Any ideas about what kind of fiction stuff i could put in?
Should I broaden or condense my topic?
What are your critiques?
Suggestions?
well first off when dose this story what year how old were u etc. 2nd do you think that your life in general is a big topic maybe you should choose just one part of it like you said going to disney world with family maybe something like that as your story
Brief Explanation of my life/Half Fiction
Going to Disney world with family
the experiences going on all the rides
waiting in the long line
living in a cool Hotel
spending time with family
Adventures after school
Run around
Find bugs
Race play tag
Move out of old house
Move in to my new house
Going into high school Freshman
Any ideas about what kind of fiction stuff i could put in?
Should I broaden or condense my topic?
What are your critiques?
Suggestions?
well first off when dose this story what year how old were u etc. 2nd do you think that your life in general is a big topic maybe you should choose just one part of it like you said going to disney world with family maybe something like that as your story